Anticlimax Narrative Essays

I. What is Climax?

Climax is the highest point of tension or drama in a narratives’ plot. Often, climax is also when the main problem of the story is faced and solved by the main character or protagonist. The phrase climax is derived from the Greek word klimax meaning “ladder.” Reading a story is like climbing a ladder, with the climax at the top. The basic elements of plot are as follows:

  1. Exposition: Characters and setting are established and the conflict, or problem, is introduced.
  2. Rising action: The conflict begins to affect the characters, complicating their lives.
  3. Climax: The conflict is faced during the main, most dramatic event of the story.
  4. Falling action: The story begins to slow down, showing results of the climax.
  5. Resolution: The story is tied up and concluded.


II. Examples of Climax

For a few examples, consider the short stories below.

Example 1

A story about a mother and daughter:

  • Conflict: A character and her mother are upset with each other. The main character believes she must be an artist, whereas her mother does not support her career and would rather have her be an accountant.
  • Climax: The character and her mother have a large argument in which they both state their feelings. At the end of the argument, they agree to love one another despite their disagreements.

Example 2

A story about a Boy and His Dog:

  • Conflict: A boy is playing with his rambunctious dog Sadie when she pulls loose from her collar and runs away. Now, the boy must find Sadie before she runs too far away to be found.
  • Climax: After looking for Sadie for a while, the boy hears barking from around the house. There, he finds his lost dog and the two happily meet again.

Example 3

A story about a boy’s crush:

  • Conflict: Sam has had a crush on Mary for months, but he does not know how to tell her how he feels.
  • Climax: At the school dance, Sam makes his feelings for Mary known by asking her to dance.

As can be seen from these short story examples, climax is the most exciting point of the plot when the conflict is finally faced.


III. The Importance of Using Climax

Climax is the high point of a story. Without climax, a story lacks excitement or an overarching meaning. Climax is considered an absolutely necessary element of plot. Beyond basic stories, climax is an essential element of many poems, movies, television shows, advertisements, and songs.


IV. Examples of Climax in Literature

Because climax is an essential aspect of plot, the examples of climax in literature are endless! Here are a few examples:

Example 1

Robert Frost’s poem “The Road Not Taken”:

Two roads diverged in a yellow wood,

And sorry I could not travel both

And be one traveler, long I stood

And looked down one as far as I could

To where it bent in the undergrowth;

In the first stanza shown above, Frost’s narrator faces a conflict: should he take one road, or the other? By the last stanza, he has made his decision. At the climax of the poem, he reveals he has taken the road “less traveled by”:

Two roads diverged in a wood, and I—

I took the one less traveled by,

And that has made all the difference.

The climax of the poem is when the narrator makes a decision to bravely take the road that is less popular but ultimately more promising, for it “has made all the difference.”

Example 2

In the novel Life of Pi, Yann Martel tells the story of a boy who named Pi loses his entire family in a shipwreck and must survive on a lifeboat with wild animals, including a Bengal tiger. Pi struggles, but in the process, realizes the power of the will to live:

I grew weary of my situation, as pointless as the weather. But life would not leave me.

The climax of the story comes when his boat at last lands in Mexico and he is rescued:

I struggled to shore and fell upon the sand. I looked about. … This beach, so soft, firm and vast, was like the cheek of God, and somewhere two eyes were glittering with pleasure and a mouth was smiling at having me there.

Pi’s physical struggle has ended, and he has gained personal and spiritual strength, having survived the ordeal.


V. Examples of Climax in Pop Culture

Like books, movies and TV shows also must have climactic scenes. Here are a few examples:

Example 1

One famous scene is in The King’s Speech. After struggling with a stutter for much of his life and working with a teacher to get rid of it at last, King George VI must address millions of citizens in a radio address. During the address, George faces his stutter and overcomes it, speaking with confidence and without aid by the end of the speech. Climactic scenes are often accompanied with dramatic music which marks that the climax is occurring. In this scene, the music becomes more dramatic, strong, and loud just as the king becomes more confident.

Example 2

The ending of The Shawshank Redemption was another climactic movie scene. Red and Andy have struggled through prison life but have finally both been freed after Andy’s escape and Red’s release. Red finds a letter left for him by his friend Andy, who has escaped, and the two meet again in Mexico. Once again, music plays alongside the climactic moment. The problem was a lack of freedom and a sense of helplessness in jail, and at last, both men are free and full of hope.


VI. Related Terms


The climax is marked by the protagonist facing the conflict and prevailing. Oftentimes, this makes for a dramatic and compelling scene. The anticlimax, on the other hand, allows the protagonist to overcome the conflict, but through seemingly trivial means. Whereas climax often requires change, effort, and drama, the anticlimax lacks all three and anticlimactically ends the story.

Example 1

Here’s the first example:

  • Conflict: The protagonist must deactivate a bomb in order to save an entire city.
  • Climax: The protagonist successfully deactivates the bomb last-minute with intelligence, critical thinking, and bravery.
  • Anticlimax: The protagonist fails to deactivate the bomb, but luckily, it was a poorly made bomb and fails to go off.

Example 2

Here’s a second example

  • Conflict: The good guys are about to face the bad guys in a huge battle.
  • Climax: After an hours-long face-off, the good guys win the battle and the bad guys back off.
  • Anticlimax: The bad guys cancel the battle, as their leader has a bad case of the flu.

As is shown in these examples, both climax and anticlimax rid the protagonist of the problem. Climax, though, is more exciting and challenging, whereas anticlimax is trivial and often disappointing.


VII. Conclusion

It may be argued that any composition must have a climax in order to be interesting or compelling. A story without a climax lacks emotion and change, which are the very things we yearn for in art. Climax is an essential element of plot in stories, poems, plays, and numerous other forms.

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When I first ventured online, the internet struck me as the last word in literary experimentation. I was in good company. For Kathy Acker, and other pioneers who were already pushing the envelope on papyrus, cyberspace (copyright William Gibson) was truly the final frontier.

The very first novel to be serialised online - Douglas Anthony Cooper's Delirium (1994) - made full use of the new medium by allowing readers to navigate between four parallel plotlines. Geoff Ryman's 253, first posted in 1996, became an instant hypertext classic. A year later, Mark Amerika's Grammatron transcended the fledgling genre by turning it into a multimedia extravaganza. This, I believe, was a crucial turning point. The brief alliance between literati and digerati was severed: groundbreaking electronic fiction would now be subsumed into the art world or relegated to the academic margins. The subsequent blogging revolution shifted the focus further away from web-based writing to news coverage of dead-tree tomes, thus adding yet another layer of commentary to the "mandarin madness of secondary discourse" George Steiner had long been lamenting. Bar a few notable exceptions (Penguin's wiki-novel or We Tell Stories project), traditional publishers have used the internet as a glorified marketing tool providing them with new ways of flogging the same old same old: e-books, Sony Readers, digi-novels, slush-pile outsourcing ...

My contention that e-literature has been gradually sidelined by the rise of the internet as a mass medium proves controversial. A straw poll of some of the movers and shakers on the digital writing scene indicates that a huge majority believes e-lit has a higher profile today than it did 10 years ago. In fact, Dene Grigar - who chaired the Electronic Literature Organization's latest international conference - was alone in thinking that I may have a point. Interestingly enough, she argues that American universities' digital humanities departments are partly to blame because of their emphasis on digitising traditional books at the expense of promoting creative electronic writing: "In reality, unless it is a department where Kate Hayles, Matt Kirschenbaum, and a handful of other scholars reside, Michael Joyce's work will not receive the attention that James Joyce's does". Nevertheless, she is convinced that e-lit remains a "viable art form". That it may be, but is it still writing?

Chris Meade, director of the thinktank if:book, agrees that e-lit practitioners are increasingly forced "to engage more fully with either the literary or digital arts". He mentions Naomi Alderman and Kate Pullinger as "two of the few writers who still straddle the literary and new media fields". Meade himself probably fits the bill too. In Search of Lost Tim, his multimedia novella which was recently described as "just possibly, the future of fiction", may be based on a mixture of blogs and videos but it still clearly belongs to the Gutenberg Galaxy.

For others, like Sue Thomas, professor of new media at Leicester's De Monfort University, the way forward (or sideways) is precisely to abandon our print fixation. This is why she rejects the term "e-lit" (with its reference to an old-fashioned notion of 'literature') in favour of "new media writing" or, better still, "transliteracy" - which covers all forms of literacy ranging from orality to social networking sites. Amerika, pope of avant-pop-cum-new-media guru has referred to himself as a designwriter, a remixologist, a visual jockey (VJ) and, of course, a net artist, over the years, whereas he used to be a plain old writer in his younger days. This isn't just a question of semantics. As Grigar points out, "one of the most difficult aspects of e-lit is the ability to talk about it fast enough, so fast is the landscape changing".

Since its inception, e-lit has been struggling to free itself from its generic limitations and now seems to be on the verge of doing so. At long last. Although interesting, its early manifestations were hardly groundbreaking. Collaborative narratives are as old as literature itself. Generative poetry simply adds a technological twist to Tzara's hat trick, the surrealists' automatic writing or Burroughs' cut-ups. Interactive fiction has its roots in Cervantes and Sterne. Hypertexts seldom improve on gamebooks like the famous Choose Your Own Adventure series, let alone BS Johnson's infamous novel-in-a-box. Besides, if you really want to add sound and pictures to words, why not make a film?

So far, the brave new world of digital literature has been largely anti-climatic. Meade himself confides that he is yet to be "seized by a digital fiction that is utterly compelling". I can but concur. Technology - the very stuff e-lit is made of - has also turned out to be its Achilles heel. The slow switch to broadband limits its potential audience, e-readers are only adapted to conventional texts - and when was the last time you curled up in bed with a hypertext? In spite of all this, Amerika may well be on to something when he claims that we are witnessing the emergence of a "digitally-processed intermedia art" in which literature and all the other arts are being "remixed into yet other forms still not fully developed". My feeling is that these "other forms" will have less and less to do with literature. Perhaps e-lit is already dead?

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